Showing posts with label Story Collage Critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Story Collage Critique. Show all posts
Friday, October 30, 2009
Blog post # 4
Most of the feedback I got from my class mates for pretty much summarizing the same thing. Everyone in the class could tell I was sledding down a hill and was going to crash into a fence. I got all positive feedback except that Hannah said that I could have done the clouds white and not different shades of blue. Some of the feedback was helpful and some was not. All the kids could tell I used all shapes including geometric, anthropomorphic and organic. The best feedback I got was people could tell that I was unhappy and I am going into a fence.
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